Lilah

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5 days ago •Jinghay• said:

Hey how've you been?!

Hate this!

6 days ago Ava Snow said:

Hi girly!

Sorry I took such a long time!

I read your prologue and left you a review. It looks like your story had potential, just make sure to go over it again and you will notice simple grammar, spelling mistakes.

Keep writing and let me know when you post a new chapter. I'm really interested by your story.

Love,

Ava Snow

I'm a mess

6 days ago DontPutOnThatDress said:

Hi would you care to swap? If so, could you please read and review/comment on it. Thank you!

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8 days ago John Sheridan said:

Though Lila is a well wished for name, the person comes first. You're doing great.

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8 days ago Ritu said:

Have you completed your story for the competition in Hogwarts? If you have please post the link to the book in the Contest group discussion. Thank you for taking part. ~Ritu.

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Love Thy Enemy

(21 days ago)

In the prologue, I liked the rushed fear. The running for your life thing was definitely stellar! My only critique is that maybe, there s... Read More »

Beautiful Scars

(21 days ago)

I loved this! However, I believe that maybe you could spellcheck a bit. Like with blemish, maybe put a comma between that and scar. ... Read More »