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6 days ago Nove Payne said:

Hi! I saw your post in the Critics group and was wondering if you were still looking for reviews on your poetry. We could arrange for a poetry swap, if you're still interested.

- Nove

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17 days ago Andrea Maller said:

Hi! I'm trying to get feedback on a novel I'm working on called Vision Zero. I would appreciate any and all comments you have about how I could improve it. Sorry if I already asked. Thanks!!!

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21 days ago iamadandelionqueen said:

Thanks again everyone for the warm wishes; Mathew Walczak I have reviewed your poem “The Siren's Call” and would appreciate a review on any of my poems. Farren Ryder I am glad my comments for your work “Intelligence, Creativity, Success" proved to be useful. Alexander Bear Holmes I have read and reviewed “The Rain Man”, and hope that my comments provide useful and would of course appreciate if you would read any of my work. Hannah Bellamy I apologize for not getting to your story “The Journey Through the Mynde” I promise to do so in the future. Roanoke Wilde I amy happy to join your group “Characters Within Us” All the best, Dandelion

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26 days ago Mathew Walczak said:

Would you like to swap poetry? If so I'd really like a read and review of The Siren's Call or River or any others, what would you like me to read?

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29 days ago Farren Ryder said:

Hi there! Thanks for the review of "Intelligence, Creativity, Success". I'll keep in mind your thoughts when I get around to editing it again. It's been a while since I originally wrote and edited it, and have only made some minor changes recently. Anyway, thanks again for the read! I hope you enjoyed it (despite my paragraph changes I'll work on that :P).

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My Reviews

The Siren's Call

(21 days ago)

I rather like the imagery that you used. The poem immediately brought to mind the poem “Not Waving but Drowning” by Stevie Smith. The a... Read More »

Diary of a martial artist

(about 1 month ago)

This rings true to the experience of a martial artist as they move through the ranks in many ways it is a never ending journey that one i... Read More »