Naki Lashiva

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    Bellara - Short Romance

    Bellara is a deformed goblin who travels to Ironforge, the city of dwarves so she can get away from the world and hide from her own ra…

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    Poems of the Epicon

    I am not very good at poetry--I certainly don't pretend to be...but here are the poems/songs I have written over the years, from 9 yea…

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    November 16 - Finished Short Story

    When a scientific expedition investigates a time machine in Antarctica, an archaeologist and a scientist go back in time to the Incas …

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    The Blue Fire - A Love Story

    When WW IV breaks out in chemical destruction, Jasmine is forced to flee her home and travel with her family into the deep deep desert…

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    The Lady Wolf's Love

    Luana, a female werewolf, has found herself a cozy life by herself, far from her wolf brethren. However, the loneliness has begun to g…

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    Zombies

    Adventuresome Madison gets herself into some trouble when she explores an underground dam facility with some friends. What does she kn…

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3 months ago Eleanor Meckley said:

Hi again! I FINALLY created my own "Dream Journal!" It's called "My Wacky Sub conscience!" So far, I have two dreams recorded. I will say, my dreams seem to be a LOT less serious then yours, and just more ridiculous and outrageous over all! Thank you for inspiring me!

Theia

4 months ago Cynthia Silver☾✯ said:

No worries! You're not the only one who's been traveling; I'm now on the opposite side of the country to sightsee Washington DC for the next week. I can't review now until I get back, but I have read the new stuff you've posted for Blue Fire, and I'm dying for the next chapters and entire book!

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4 months ago Roanoke Wilde said:

Hey! I'm Roanoke Wilde, obviously. ;)

I have a WIP fantasy novel up, "Figura Mutante" and I need some feedback. I REALLY want to get it published one day. If you have the time, I'd appreciate it if you could read and tell me what I need to work on. I'd be willing to swap, though it might take a while to get back to you. :P

Thanks, and I hope to hear from you soon!! :)

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4 months ago jaz said:

hi there. i'm sorry for replying late for your comment as i didn't notice it earlier:)

well my POV is third person omniscient so the POV actually switch around like you're watching tv. i don't really like first person as it puts so many restrictions since the view is just from one character.

Theia

4 months ago Cynthia Silver☾✯ said:

To your comment from a few days ago (man, I can’t believe how I’ve allowed myself to get so utterly swamped on both review and comments!):

Haha, when you hearted all those other things, I found myself also reading them for fun, and cringing at how juvenile they seem. If you’re tired of mythology, I do have some stories that aren’t related to it (even if they suck).

Haha, yeah, I always reread books that I like for that very reason. But I do love the first time the most when everything comes as a surprise.

And here I was thinking that he’d be the guy who hates all werewolves purely because they’re werewolves, and then his attitude changes when he gets to know Lu. THAT is cliched. XD Haha, what’s your opinion of Twilight? (I only ask because I stayed up past midnight watching it with my mom yesterday)

Yeah, I saw, and I was so excited! I’ll try read both of them when I can, but again, completely swamped, not just with Figment work but also school work. Having a few extra days of spring break comes at a price… a very tiresome, time consuming one.

Dang. I think the longest I’ve spent on a review is three hours, but mine typically take one if the chapters are as long as SoV’s. And wow, thank you so much for those suggestions! I never even thought/heard about proactive vs reactive scenes! That’ll definitely help me in this chapter, if I could actually find a moment to write, that is…

Well, I’m quite fond of the R & J ending, LOL. So romantic… Wait, what? I already identified myself as an aromantic IRL. XD

Wow. Haha, that’s kinda strange to think about, since my parents promised me that I better find somewhere else to live once I’m out of high school, LOL. Mainly off at college in either a dorm or apartment. Must me nice that you still get to live with family.

Haha, yeah, that must be annoying. That’s why I usually save everything on Figment except for responding to comments for a computer. Except, I cannot tell you how many times I’ve lost even comments on my phone due to lagged out WiFi or just pure stupidity.

Nope. I suck at poetry, haha. You?

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My Reviews

Sedition of Vows

(4 months ago)

Hey there again :) I decided to combine my reviews of chapter 7 and 8 into one review. First of all, I absolutely love the way you wr... Read More »

The Gaea Emblem [#1]

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Okay, here's that review you asked for :) On the Prologue: I'm surprised that girls would be sleeping in the same room as the boys.... Read More »