Prateik KD

My Writings

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    The Inner World

    A family that built a house that cause a town to survive. Life is not that simply though, as it should be just left alone.

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    Shadows Of An Assassin

    The Tale of the Dark Brotherhood in Skyrim. After the return of the listener

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    Shadow Of Death

    Sitting in a bus stop waiting. My Love and pain are one. When I feel happy I also feel pain, I am that what which is without love of m…

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    Empire of Despair

    The Castle of Alikzxeum is a place of training, The elite caste of Alixken young nobles and warriors come to learn how to rule the the…

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    Desert Of Darkness

    In the deserts of Kinshiy life is either long and brutal or short and brutal but when a guild rat finds a strange orb, his life change…

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    Last Wish

    A Boy And Girl are in a graveyeard at Night. No One knows that they are there of that they're even out of bed. What could go wrong?

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Talk to me!


over 1 year ago Kelsey Taeckens said:

Hi! Can you please read and heart Unexpected Gifts (the contest version)? I'm in a heart-based contest and my goal is 1200 hearts. I'll read anything in return. Thanks!


over 1 year ago Brooklyn Hunter said:

Hi would you like to swap? I HAVE TWO! I entered my short story To Infinity And Beyond (Yes, I realize that is a buzz lightyear quote. stick with me here. Its just a coincidence.) into the seventeeenmag 2012 contest and my other short Mr. Stones Girl into the Patterson contest. I really need your help! They total about to about 5 min, so Ill read anything 10 min and under. Thanks for your time- BK :)


over 1 year ago Margy said:

Would you mind reading my story: sometimes, honesty isn't the best policy or the promise i plan to keep i am willing to read and comment on your writing too if you check out mine and if you like it, please heart it. I promise it will be well thought out commentary. I am trying to win a contest!! thank you and good luck on more of your writing!


over 1 year ago Mackenzie Kelley said:

Hi, I am entered into a heart based contest so it would mean the world to me if you would read my story It's Not Okay and heart it if you like it. If you don't do free reads then I am open to swapping. If you have already received this or don't do swaps I sincerely apologize for bothering you.


over 1 year ago Kayy said:

Hi! I just wrote a story called The Killer for the Seventeen Magazine contest and i'm looking for some constructive criticism. I'd love it if you could check it out. I'm willing to swap if you'd like. Thank you and sorry if i've already asked! :]

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My Reviews

With Eyes Closed

(almost 2 years ago)

For our Review Swap, Sorry of the wait. I've been busy with work SO first off you make good use of the first person view and how each ch... Read More »

Not What You Would Have Imagined

(over 2 years ago)

first line, you write "the" instead of "that". Maybe its just me but the line "the warm feeling it gives" just seems a little clunky. La... Read More »