Prateik KD

My Writings

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    The Letter Of Whispering Water

    A letter from a friend to a friend.Not of love but of pleading, as something evil is coming and help is needed. (Just for you Thomas)

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    Shadow Of Death

    Sitting in a bus stop waiting. My Love and pain are one. When I feel happy I also feel pain, I am that what which is without love of m…

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    Empire of Despair

    The Castle of Alikzxeum is a place of training, The elite caste of Alixken young nobles and warriors come to learn how to rule the the…

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    Desert Of Darkness

    In the deserts of Kinshiy life is either long and brutal or short and brutal but when a guild rat finds a strange orb, his life change…

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  • Graveyard
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    Last Wish

    A Boy And Girl are in a graveyeard at Night. No One knows that they are there of that they're even out of bed. What could go wrong?

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    The Darkness Inside Me

    Three friends; A strong willed girl, a handsome young man, and a boy who can unsettle the devil himself. what darkness has driven him…

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Talk to me!


over 2 years ago Siena Renee said:

Hello! I just finished your cover. As always critiques are encouraged. I hope you enjoy this cover!

Thanks! -Siena


about 3 years ago Marissa LaPorte said:

Hello, I was wondering if you would be interested in a swap.

If so, could you please read "To Discover Beauty in Death" and leave a comment with your honest opinion and any suggestions (if you have the time for a comment) and a heart if you find it worthy. I will do the same for a piece of your choice. Please comment on my wall what you would like me to read and I will get to it as soon as possible.

Thank you!

NOTE: This is not a heart swap and I will READ your work.


almost 5 years ago Brooklyn Hunter said:

Hi would you like to swap? I HAVE TWO! I entered my short story To Infinity And Beyond (Yes, I realize that is a buzz lightyear quote. stick with me here. Its just a coincidence.) into the seventeeenmag 2012 contest and my other short Mr. Stones Girl into the Patterson contest. I really need your help! They total about to about 5 min, so Ill read anything 10 min and under. Thanks for your time- BK :)


almost 5 years ago Margy said:

Would you mind reading my story: sometimes, honesty isn't the best policy or the promise i plan to keep i am willing to read and comment on your writing too if you check out mine and if you like it, please heart it. I promise it will be well thought out commentary. I am trying to win a contest!! thank you and good luck on more of your writing!


almost 5 years ago Mackenzie Kelley said:

Hi, I am entered into a heart based contest so it would mean the world to me if you would read my story It's Not Okay and heart it if you like it. If you don't do free reads then I am open to swapping. If you have already received this or don't do swaps I sincerely apologize for bothering you.

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My Reviews

With Eyes Closed

(about 5 years ago)

For our Review Swap, Sorry of the wait. I've been busy with work SO first off you make good use of the first person view and how each ch... Read More »

Not What You Would Have Imagined

(over 5 years ago)

first line, you write "the" instead of "that". Maybe its just me but the line "the warm feeling it gives" just seems a little clunky. La... Read More »