Max Baumeister

My Writings

  • Something is wrong wtih me- suicide
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    The Final Setp

    “I see your red door, I want it painted black No colors any more, I want them to turn black I see the girls walk by dressed in their…

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  • Guy at bar
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    A Love Like You

    I guess what bothers me the most is knowing that I will die with nobody batting an eye. Perhaps that sounds selfish- but the idea of d…

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  • Rose
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    I Am Sure He Loves Me

    It was the 1960’s, and France was flourishing. Their economic growth was, on the rise, as the French saw a great boost in their econom…

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  • Chaim
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    ChainSaw Charley

    Sweat was dripping down his chin as he cut through the power line pole. The chainsaw ate the post- wood was spitting into the air- The…

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    "What a Tangled Web We Weave"

    Oddly written? This was written with a lot of thought, and it will seem odd at first... but then again, odd is all I know. It is a sad…

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  • Rum
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    Misery Diluted by Rum

    Do you ever feel like you wake up- go about your day- fall asleep and it all starts over? Does it feel monotonous and overwhelming? Th…

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16 days ago Kelsea Dove said:

Thank you for the detailed feedback!

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16 days ago Max Baumeister said:

Not a problem :)

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17 days ago Elizabeth McCready said:

Thank you so much for the comment! It really helps to have such detailed feedback, I appreciate that so much!!

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17 days ago Elizabeth McCready said:

Thank you so much for the comment! It really helps to have such detailed feedback, I appreciate that so much!!

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25 days ago Jen. Anderson said:

Hey there! I noticed you were leaving some really detailed reviews for people, and I was wondering if you'd like to do a critique swap? If you're interested, I'll review anything up to 15,000 words in exchange for a review on "Little Thief".

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(17 days ago)

Salutations! I just want to let you know- I am only trying to critique, and I mean absolutely no harm. ____________________________... Read More »

She Stole My Heart

(22 days ago)

I appreciate your comment but with 1,000 words there are certain achievements an author intends to make... I believe I created the short ... Read More »