Max Baumeister

My Writings

  • Shattered heart
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    She Stole My Heart

    “Ya fool!” Screamed Susan as she began to cry. “Now, Susan, let’s calm down. I am glad that you are expressing yourself- but…

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  • God
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    Is Your God My God?

    Yes, this story is about the idea of God. However, like all my stories there is a very sophisticated point in the end- and the point a…

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  • Labcoat
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    The Lab Coat of Silence

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    A Snapshot of Your Soul

    Life can be depressing, hard to understand, and difficult. I have no answers- never have- and will never claim to have an answer. Yet,…

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  • Psychiatrist
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    No- I am not a Wizard

    It may seem like my stories are fiction- but actually- each one listed as "Nonfiction" is derived from a real event. Some have to do w…

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    A Paper Airlpane

    Do you know what it is like to lose Love? I am sure you do. Everybody does. Yet, most people move forward, while I drink the misery aw…

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16 days ago Kelsea Dove said:

Thank you for the detailed feedback!

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16 days ago Max Baumeister said:

Not a problem :)

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17 days ago Elizabeth McCready said:

Thank you so much for the comment! It really helps to have such detailed feedback, I appreciate that so much!!

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17 days ago Elizabeth McCready said:

Thank you so much for the comment! It really helps to have such detailed feedback, I appreciate that so much!!

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25 days ago Jen. Anderson said:

Hey there! I noticed you were leaving some really detailed reviews for people, and I was wondering if you'd like to do a critique swap? If you're interested, I'll review anything up to 15,000 words in exchange for a review on "Little Thief".

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(17 days ago)

Salutations! I just want to let you know- I am only trying to critique, and I mean absolutely no harm. ____________________________... Read More »

She Stole My Heart

(22 days ago)

I appreciate your comment but with 1,000 words there are certain achievements an author intends to make... I believe I created the short ... Read More »