Kayla Amaro

My Writings

  • When i blinked
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    When I Blinked

    A poem about a father grieving the loss of his schizophrenic daughter.

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  • Adrianne
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    On that Frigid Night

    This is the last thing I'm posting on Figment. I usually don't write poetry, but here is something I was able to come up with.

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  • The surface
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    The Surface

    [CURRENT WIP]**Cover by Daniel Jimenez** A young prince just entering the throne. A female assassin trained to destroy his rule... A…

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  • The scientist cover
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    The Scientist Who Was Supposed to Die

    One autumn afternoon, Paige Evans meets a mysterious man at the cemetery where former millionaire Walter Livingston is buried. Determi…

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  • Maiden cover
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    Maiden in the Mask

    A girl doesn't know her name, her origins, where she is, or why she's trapped. She doesn't know why someone trapped her in the mask. O…

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    When Life Meets Death

    Lyvia loves her purpose of giving the breath of life. Until she meets Sephtis, who kills everything that he touches. Lyvia is determin…

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about 15 hours ago LeChevalierRoland said:

Hey, I haven't been on in awhile...what's going on?

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1 day ago Biometal Omega said:

Hmmmmmm... That could be done with more suspense and mystery, but if the story lacks too much information then it would just seem ambiguous.

It could just mean that there needs to be a style change in wording, or even perhaps that it isn't surprising to you because you wrote it. I don't really know.

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2 days ago Biometal Omega said:

To be honest, I would need more information to tell you how I'd go about that. What is it that is dissatisfying about it to you? Is it something that you couldn't possibly edit or revise into the story?

I can tell you for certain I've done that twice in Meta's Tale already. I'm on the third round already, thanks to universe updates, so if there's anything I can do to help, tell me. I might be able to do something, I dunno.

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3 days ago WingsofAnEagle said:

>>I unfolowed you by accident..and dats why I just followed you lol<<

O.O Oh ma goodness-- you blinked? o.o Where b your new stor-ee?

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6 days ago Biometal Omega said:

Huh.... I suppose the same thing as when I'm stuck on my novel. Talk to other people, and think a bunch.

Can't say that's probably all that helpful, but that's really all I have. Anything I can do?

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Universal Effect

(about 1 month ago)

Chapter Three left me with a lot of curiosity and a lot of questions. What are Error's motives? Now that they are in Maoric, do Sid and N... Read More »

Meta's tale

(about 1 month ago)

Chapter Two Review: Alright, let's get over the bad cop part first: Celia asks how Meta knew that she wasn't human. I understand Me... Read More »