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2 months ago M.E.M. said:

Even though Figment is shutting down doesn't mean I'm going to stop posting stuff. So come and check out my writings, I'd love the feedback before we are a tore apart but the shut down of Figment.

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10 months ago Andrea Maller said:

Hi! I'm trying to get feedback on a novel I'm working on called Vision Zero. I would appreciate any and all comments you have about how I could improve it. Sorry if I already asked. Thanks!!!

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11 months ago Haley Kissell said:

Hi there! It seems like it's been awhile since anyone's stopped over to say hi so I thought I would. I'm Haley. *waves* and you must be a fantastic writer to have so many followers!

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over 1 year ago Karla said:

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What if at age 16 you find out you wont live to even be 20 years old, what if you're in love with a guy, but ever time he makes your heart beat race, it kills you slowly and painfully? what if you only have to choices, DIE sooner but enjoy that short life Or LIVE a little longer but without enjoying anything, what would you choose?

This is Samantha's Dilemma

I hope someone reads it her story!!

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