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3 days ago Aaron said:

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about 1 month ago Andrea Maller said:

Hi! I'm trying to get feedback on a novel I'm working on called Vision Zero. I would appreciate any and all comments you have about how I could improve it. Sorry if I already asked. Thanks!!!

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3 months ago Haley Kissell said:

Hi there! It seems like it's been awhile since anyone's stopped over to say hi so I thought I would. I'm Haley. *waves* and you must be a fantastic writer to have so many followers!

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9 months ago Karla said:

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What if at age 16 you find out you wont live to even be 20 years old, what if you're in love with a guy, but ever time he makes your heart beat race, it kills you slowly and painfully? what if you only have to choices, DIE sooner but enjoy that short life Or LIVE a little longer but without enjoying anything, what would you choose?

This is Samantha's Dilemma

I hope someone reads it her story!!

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over 1 year ago Melannie Poston said:

Hi! Would you like to swap reviews with me? I'd love it if you could help me out with my short story, "Golden Slipper" It's a retelling of Cinderella with themes from Araby.

If you'd like to swap, just tell me which of your stories I should read :) Have good day!

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Don't Leave Me

(over 4 years ago)

this story is amazing and i loved it up until you killed the character, its rushed and needs detail we must know who they both are to fee... Read More »

Quickened

(over 5 years ago)

I love this! You really brought your story to my attention when saying: The little brother wiped his nose with the back of his sleeve. ... Read More »