Brittany J.

My Writings

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    Of Beast and Prey

    Scared and alone at a new school, Emily wishes for the villain of her book to come alive so she can have revenge on the unwelcoming st…

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    Collection

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    Unlikely Beginnings

    My entry for the Fate Contest. A story about a girl who doesn't know how she ended up where she is, but she suspects it's fate.

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    Her Real Prince

    Thanks for everyone who hearted! Justine Magazine Contest Semi-Finalist! Based on the fairytale of Aladdin. (: Hope you enjoy !

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    Twisted Words

    For the Grave Mercy Contest. :) A story about a girl putting behind her horrible past, escaping her evil containment, and becoming a n…

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    Never Letting Go

    Valentine will never stop loving him. Heartbreak (: Beautiful cover by Brookie!!

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8 months ago AyyJellybean1 said:

Hey, I don't know if you still check out your account but I just logged back in and wanted to see how those I follow are doing. :)

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over 1 year ago Conner Van Asch (Chesster) said:

New Christian group. http://figment.com/groups/33443-C-H-I-S-T-I-A-N-S

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over 3 years ago Shammi said:

Hey would you like to swap with me?

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over 3 years ago Kate Schroeder said:

Hey, there! I've written a story called "Smoke and Mirrors" and I was wondering if you could swap and give me feedback! If you could, I'd be your best friend! (Oh, and read something of yours, of course.) Thanks in advance!

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over 3 years ago William Carter said:

Salutations, my good fellow Figgie.

^^I sound so fancy!

Ha ha, anyway. Want to swap? I have edited and re-edited my WIP novel Imaginatia, and am ready for it to receive feedback on its first chapters.

I'll read anything of yours that is under 20 minutes long. While I can't promise a lengthy review, I will promise a thoughtful comment. Not some "OMG, this is AMAZING!" comment.

If you accept, please post on my wall what you would like me to read after you have read mine. I will not read your piece of work if you post it in the comments section of the story, nor will I give a thoughtful comment on yours if you won't give a thoughtful comment on mine. If you would like to swap without exchanging comments, just hearts (if deserved) and reactions, I'm alright with that. Just please specify this when you post on my wall.

Thank you! :D

Also, if you have already read Imaginatia in the past, I have re-edited it quite a bit, so it won't be the same ol same ol. I'd love it if you looked back at your old comment/review and let me know if I did/didn't edit what you suggested!

Here's the link to Imaginatia: http://figment.com/books/690701-Imaginatia

Have a good day! Stay awesome! :D

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King and Lionheart

(about 5 years ago)

First paragraph of Prologue- "The way his ocean blue eyes sparked in the setting sun captivated me." I'm just wondering if you meant to s... Read More »

Silence

(about 5 years ago)

Third sentence- "The sky is bright blue, with no clouds in sight." You changed tenses here, change it to "The sky was bright blue, with n... Read More »