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    Float

    Written for The Springsweet challenge.

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    Splattered

    With this prize, not to mention a heart, at stake, it's pretty much a fight to the death.

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6 days ago Amenah said:

[I can't believe I'm actually spamming here. -_- I'm sorry in advance.]
Still, you must have something you'd like me to read and give you feedback on. (: If you read a piece of mine, I'd be happy to. Your choice which, they're all under 10 minutes. Please remember to heart if you liked it. If you comment/review, I'm more likely to do it for you too.
Thanks for reading this, anyway.
If you want to swap, let me know on my page what you'd like me to give you feedback on. :)
Sorry again. :$

Girl walkiing on water

16 days ago Karisma Antopia said:

Swap?

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19 days ago Myranda Neizer said:

Please read my short story, "Crust kids" and leave hearts, comments and reviews. I entered it in the short story contest, sweetspring, so it needs hearts in order to be considered for the win. :]
Follow Nova, Rae and their road dogs Dude and Joe as they get ready to stick their thumbs out escape their lives in North East Florida.
See what gets left behind when Rae realizes you can count on no one but yourself, and your own two feet.
you'll taste the sweat forming on your upper lip in the southern heat and smell the sweet magnolias as Rae quickly learns that Sometimes love is like a Nova star, it's brightest right before it vanishes...
"home is where you back pack is, and freedom is the shrieking of a freight train."

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22 days ago Samantha Crystal said:

hey! I read your piece "Float" for the Springsweet Challenge! I think it was really good! Would you mind reading mine? I followed you too!

Meee

27 days ago Kearstin Clark said:

Swap? :) Please read "No Advice, is Worse than Bad Advice." Thank you!

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The Follow

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I already left a comment but I just read a new chapter and I just like Desdemona more and more. I almost expected her to be a loveles... Read More »

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I have read the two chapters you have up and you've done a great job so far. The prologue fits the requirements. It seems to set a ba... Read More »