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over 1 year ago Natasha V. said:

Hey! My friend Ali Hart posted a new story, and she would love some feedback. She hasn't been very active on Figment lately, and she'd really love if you could read/heart her story. It's called A Casual Explosion, and here's the link: http://figment.com/books/481978-A-Casual-Explosion If you want to swap, please reply on my wall, as she doesn't always check hers. :) Thanks, and I'm really sorry if she or I have already asked you or if you don’t like swaps!

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over 1 year ago Ae Clane said:

Hello! I'm open for swaps. Kindly heart "Lives". Thanks in advance. Sorry if I bother you.

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about 2 years ago ASA said:

hey r u ever on this site

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over 2 years ago Olivia Rowland said:

Your Awesome

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over 2 years ago Elisa Xu said:

Sure! So we each give one of our pieces that we'd like the other to read and comment on (or review). For me, it'd be great of you could read 'Broken Pieces Of Glass'. If you have anymore questions, just post on my wall! :D

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I Am So Blue

(over 2 years ago)

I can see what you mean by the jumbled ideas. Not that there were any jumbled up words, but at times I was a little confused. The prose a... Read More »

Ghost Train

(over 2 years ago)

I really liked this story. As you said, it was a very very rough draft, and I did manage to catch a few rough edges--using the phrase or ... Read More »