Katherine Paik

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3 months ago Katherine Paik said:

I’m sorry I gave you that impression. I re-red my review, and I see that I sound repetitive and slightly-sickly-sweet at times. Example; “so you can really have fun with this.” That was a cliché line to use. Ah!

What I was trying to say there is the idea you have sounds like a good way to explore what you want to write about, and to build a complex world around.

You can take or leave the various questions I included. They (are supposed to) underscore the potential your premise has.

Also, you do have good imagery. I didn’t mean that’s just a good start; I really think it’s a start that you’ve taken time to flesh out.

I added “don’t feel pressured to,” because I wanted to tell you that you shouldn’t let outside pressures/opinions define what you write. This comment was just based on your request for a comment, not on the actual story.

Sorry for giving you the wrong impression. I know it's what you think about your writing, not what I think, that really matters.

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3 months ago Marcus Johnson said:

You are the first person i'm responding to, the idea of being aware while dreaming is a real thing. The audience I am trying to capture; the world. I feel as though you did not truly like or respect my preview. Thanks for the review, Have a lovely day.

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3 months ago Marcus Johnson said:

Please, can you read review my preview? If people don't like it I won't write it.

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4 months ago Sydney Lacroix said:

Swap? Please read my *WIP* Life As He Knows It. Comment or review, heart it (If deserved), give an emotion (If deserved). I will do the same and read anything around the same time length, 60-80 minutes. Thanks, and have a nice day!

~Sydney

P.S: If you leave a review, you may only get a comment in return. Sorry. Also, don't do a review or comment on just grammar. And no one liners, if you tell me that you liked my story, tell me why you liked it. Explain it to me.

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4 months ago Sasha said:

Care to swap? Would you read my short stories "Only one moment" or "Remember me in this unraveled world" and I will read anything yours

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