Aisha Hellman

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4 days ago ThePhoenixRising said:

Hi! How would you like to swap today? If so, please read my story Sha Po Lang. Post on my wall what you would like me to read in return. Thanks!

Still not interested? Here's the first line: In Chinese astrology, there are three stars that control a person’s destiny- “Sha” meaning to kill, “Po” meaning to break, and “Lang” meaning to envy and to lust...

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about 1 month ago Nica Vero said:

HELLO! I am looking for followers so if you are interested, check out my page and potentially figment-stalk me. If not, I don't mind. (Tell your friends too, please)

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2 months ago M.A.Chase said:

Hi! Please check out my story "The Girl Who Ventured"? If it's worthy, please heart because it's for the Doctor Who Contest. I will swap for anything in your library, just post on my wall! If you're not interested, please ignore this. Thank you for your time!

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2 months ago Threa said:

Hey, I would love it if you'd read Complicated. If you enjoyed it please give it a heart. If you want me to read/heart one of yours just let me know. Thanks! (: P.S If I already asked you this, please ignore. Sorry!

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3 months ago Carlos Ordaz said:

Hello dear figment world, my name is Carlos and I am an aspiring writer who dreams of becoming published. I'm sure I share a similar dream with most of you. I'm on figment in an attempt to build a fanbase and improve my writing. In the few months I've been on this site, I've already learned and improved so much. I would be honored if you were willing to read a short story of mine and provide some feedback. I would be happy to return the favor, just post what you would like me to read on my wall. Becoming a published author is my dream and I've decided to risk everything to chase my dream. I'm taking time off from college to pursue this dream of mine and I would be grateful if you decided to read some of work. If you like what I wrote and only if YOU think I'm worthy of it, I would be honored if you followed me. Thank you for your time and have a lovely day.

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My Reviews

Derange

(6 months ago)

Overall it was pretty good. I got a little confused in the transition between him remembering the party and remembering the murder. Durin... Read More »

After Illume

(9 months ago)

I really like this story, it's an original idea and it's extremely interesting. Few critiques: In paragraph 7 you need the word lik... Read More »