Micalena Canady

My Writings

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    The Moon

    This a rewrite of an old story I posted on here. The original can still be found on my page. An art student gets lost in the woods,…

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    The Moon (Rough Draft)

    This is based off of a dream I had. Chandra was an art student at a prestigious college; the school just so happened to border a cree…

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    Uncommon Descriptions of Common Objects

    READ: My lone attempt at comedy. If you have any suggestions for things you would like me to describe, leave a message on my wall and …

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    Black

    Another story based off of a dream. Raella spends her time avoiding the social court life, waiting to be married, and slowly discover…

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    Letters

    A series of letters, written as haikus, between and elderly man and his elderly love. Once young courtiers, their life together was hi…

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    Still

    PLEASE READ: This is the first time I have ever written something directly out of my own life. It's not all based off of memory, but …

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almost 4 years ago Animus Draconis said:

Hi there! Please give my story a quick read, a heart and any other emotions you feel maybe a comment (a review would be nice, but not required, it is a published novel) and I will give you a full review on at least two chapters of any writing of your choice! :) Thanks! (Click the picture to link to my writing!)

over 4 years ago Hailey Calvert said:

Hey! The contest I'm in closes *!TODAY!* and I'm in 11th place, I need to be in the top 10! I could really use your help! I was wondering if you'd be interested in helping a person out? Please read/heart my SHORT-STORY "Bound" please and then post on my wall what you'd like me to swap for in return! Thank you so much for your time, I appreciate it! Have a wonderful day! :)

http://figment.com/books/631479-Bound

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over 4 years ago Halena Sparks said:

Swap please? If so, amble over to my page then :P I'd love feedback (and hearts!) Thanks! Keep writin' and smilin' :)

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over 4 years ago Beatriz Romero said:

Hi! Would you like to swap? If so, please read and heart "Gwen" if you like it. I will happily read anything of yours in return :)

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over 4 years ago E.R. Warren said:

“He was beautiful like a willow, but with a body that had been carefully designed for violence. She froze, struck dumb by the way his back lazily curled against the pillar, organic, with his green robes pooling around his waist, stripped off in the summer heat. He sprawled out on the deck, bored, flicking his fingers so that little violet flames leapt off his fingernails. Princess Asuka shivered—this demon couldn’t be more different from the boy she loved.” —The Princess and the Fox Demon

Micalena, thank you so much for following me and all your support. It means a great deal. Against my better judgement, I have decided to participate in The Kiss Contest. My entry for the contest is 378 words, and if you have two minutes, I would love to get your feedback.

If you’re working on a story and would like my feedback, just let me know. I’m always happy to share the love with my followers.

Best, E.R. Warren

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My Reviews

Before I'm Gone

(over 5 years ago)

Beautfiully written, I urge you to proofread as there are a few minor errors which are most likely typos. The beginning was very strong, ... Read More »

Western World

(over 5 years ago)

You change tenses constantly, and this sounds more like an essay than a story. You need to show the audience more than you tell them, and... Read More »