S. Locksmith

My Writings

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    ghost story

    a weird little story i wrote to go along with this collage: www.polyvore.com/ghost_story_read_below/set?id=197255424 idk maybe someo…

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    I wrote this short story for school (which explains the rushed ending and general badness. Deadlines, you know.) Follows a crew of spa…

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    A poem about me and my brother.

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    Warmth and Kindness

    A poem inspired by the song Warmth and Kindness by Tomohito Nishiura. For the King Dork Approximately contest. Please leave constructi…

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    Alone in an Ocean

    A poem about being alone. Please leave constructive criticism!

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    A poem about waiting in winter. Please leave constructive criticism!

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Talk to me!


over 1 year ago Ivy said:

Hi there! I just added a couple of chapters to The Silver Umbrella, and I'd love to hear what you think of it. It's pretty long at this point, but if you get around to reading at least part of it leave a comment on my wall and I'll check out one or more of your stories.


almost 2 years ago Coral Vaci said:

Your welcome! Same to you! :D


over 2 years ago Echo Song said:

Thank you for the comment. I really appreciate it.


over 2 years ago begin_to_end said:

I personally wanted to thank you for joining my group, Poets United. It really means a lot to me. Feel free to spread the word, because when we have ten members we will have a contest!!! Vi

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My Reviews

The Wish

(over 2 years ago)

Hi! Thanks for the kind review. I have a couple of suggestions for this story. One thing I would cut down on is the amount of telling in... Read More »

Rain, Rain

(over 2 years ago)

This is a nice story and I got into the character right away. There are just a couple things I would fix. One is your run-on sentences, ... Read More »