Linda D

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    If the Shoe Fits

    COMPLETE - Awesome Cover by Rylie Van Wingerden - A completely absurd retelling of Cinderella. - Where benevolent fairies wreak havo…

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    The Etiquette of Tea.

    WIP Cover by Mac Ford ......Robert is still reeling from a broken relationship. He wants nothing to do with dating, but now he is hav…

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    Good Domestic Help

    2015 GRAND FINALIST WINNER MarchMatchup final Round. “This.” He sighed, sweeping his arm through the air. “This is what ignorance does…

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    Life: Take 2

    2016 WINNER March Match-up Round 3: an extra hour occurs at midnight, but only a handful of people can experience it.

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    Hita & Fryst

    2016 WINNER MARCH MATCH-UP Round 2. “We weren’t the only ones affected."

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    Marigold's Love

    2015 WINNER Round 3 Marchmatchup She woke up to tapping on glass only to find someone in her mirror.

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The world is my Oyster

(24 days ago)

I have been told that in writing you want to grab the reader. Slow, passive “was” sentences slow it down. The Sea choked me….The win... Read More »

Fate?

(4 months ago)

Interesting story. I have one suggestion: Instead of: "I have to cross the table she is sitting on" perhaps "I have to pass the tab... Read More »