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    Pluck

    In the apathetic city of New York, where nobody cares about anyone else's business, Alice need not worry about standing out. Spending …

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    The Firetender

    The Firetender's job is only to listen and tell, not to get involved. Call me the messenger, but every fire has a song and if I don't …

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    Insomnia

    When you're lying in bed and the clock slowly bleeds from 12 to 5 while the wind storms on outside your window... this is what I see d…

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    Thoughts Like Marbles

    A random poetry collection of whatever comes out of my mind when I feel like writing. Probably inspired by T.S. Eliot's writing so sor…

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    The Promised Kinslen

    There are some bonds that can never break, no matter what. And Alianne is scared the Renalia has just broken one. As she struggles to …

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    Dreaming of Skywing

    My original NaNoWriMo novel idea :3 Kestrel, Skylark, Cayenne, and Jay are a family. They're the only things keeping each other goi…

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about 5 hours ago fireparchment said:

Omg I can't believe you willingly read and critiqued all my works. Thank you so much for that. Apologies if a lot of them confused you. Tbh, I didn't have a solid plot in mind as I was writing the short story, so I literally had no idea where the story was heading until it finally felt like the end. As for the poems, they were more like the babies of my self-indulgence at the time. Hahaha.

But yeah. Again, thanks a lot for the feedback. As you already know, I've tried doing 25 free reads plus feedback for other peeps, so I might take a break for a while. I'll check out Pluck as soon as I can, though.

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8 months ago Zoie Sanders said:

Hi! I just created a poetry group called Pocketful of Poetry. We have a lot of creative prompts and contests to challenge you while having fun! If you need people to read your poems and give you feedback then this group will be really helpful. I hope you can join us :)Here's the link to the group: http://figment.com/groups/26029-Pocketful-of-Poetry

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10 months ago PandaAsiran said:

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about 1 year ago Daniel Alivan said:

Hey Redwall lover, will you please join my group, a tale of redwall rp? Also, will you read The Eastlands? I'm happy to swap

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over 1 year ago Livie said:

Hey.

I'd just like to drop by and thank you, again, for the review you gave. It was really helpful, but complimentary at the same time. I made the dialogue a little more natural, and I added a mysterious stranger to make it a little more interesting and dynamic, and I've started to focus on Rhonwen's surroundings whenever I start to ramble.

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Line in the Sand

(10 days ago)

For now, I only read the first two chapters so this will be based on what I’ve read so far. Of course, this is all my own personal opinio... Read More »

Perspective

(over 1 year ago)

I'm a little confused as to what exactly this poem is about. I do love the way you kind of scorch the idea into the reader's mind with bu... Read More »