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  • Insomnia
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    Insomnia

    When you're lying in bed and the clock slowly bleeds from 12 to 5 while the wind storms on outside your window... this is what I see d…

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  • Bokeh
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    Thoughts Like Marbles

    A random poetry collection of whatever comes out of my mind when I feel like writing. Probably inspired by T.S. Eliot's writing so sor…

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  • Promise cover
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    The Promised Kinslen

    There are some bonds that can never break, no matter what. And Alianne is scared the Renalia has just broken one. As she struggles to …

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  • Paroxysm
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    Paroxysm

    When something shatters and becomes nothing.

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  • Dreaming of skywing
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    Dreaming of Skywing

    My original NaNoWriMo novel idea :3 Kestrel, Skylark, Cayenne, and Jay are a family. They're the only things keeping each other goi…

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    Firefly

    Just a little something to get back into writing again :)

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3 months ago Zoie Sanders said:

Hi! I was wondering if you could look at my poem titled Ocean Blue. I would like some constructive criticism on it and a possible new title! It's a poem, so it would only take about two minutes to read and comment or review so I would really appreciate it! Thank you so much :) Here is a link to the poem: http://figment.com/books/376070-Ocean-Blue

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3 months ago Zoie Sanders said:

Hi! I just created a poetry group called Pocketful of Poetry. We have a lot of creative prompts and contests to challenge you while having fun! If you need people to read your poems and give you feedback then this group will be really helpful. I hope you can join us :)Here's the link to the group: http://figment.com/groups/26029-Pocketful-of-Poetry

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5 months ago PandaAsiran said:

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9 months ago Daniel Alivan said:

Hey Redwall lover, will you please join my group, a tale of redwall rp? Also, will you read The Eastlands? I'm happy to swap

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11 months ago Livie said:

Hey.

I'd just like to drop by and thank you, again, for the review you gave. It was really helpful, but complimentary at the same time. I made the dialogue a little more natural, and I added a mysterious stranger to make it a little more interesting and dynamic, and I've started to focus on Rhonwen's surroundings whenever I start to ramble.

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Perspective

(11 months ago)

I'm a little confused as to what exactly this poem is about. I do love the way you kind of scorch the idea into the reader's mind with bu... Read More »

Gilbert Stone

(11 months ago)

I'm going to go super in depth and be really really nitpicky here because I feel that since you're going to be giving me honest feedback,... Read More »