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almost 4 years ago Cayla Annais said:

HELLO FELLOW FIGGER:-) could you please read my novel; THE YEAR IS 2027. It is the start of a dystopain novel:-) I would love if you could read it!! Thanks:-)

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almost 4 years ago B. Graham said:

Good gracious light

almost 4 years ago Leighanna Hornick said:

Sorry for being so obnoxiously large. Get to the group through my page or this link: http://figment.com/groups/25364-Lemony-Snicket

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almost 4 years ago Kaili said:

I reviewed your story (Truth like Teeth) I love it! I was wondering if you could check out one of my stories and review? Your thoughts would be really great to hear.

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about 4 years ago Charming Quill said:

Sure I'll swap. I'll read both of your stories and give reviews or opinions if you'll read the first chapter of Queens and Dragons in return. It's a bit long, but I only ask for the first chapter and you don't have to go through the entire novel. Let me know if this works for you. Thanks. ;)

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Dangerous Magic

(about 4 years ago)

My notes: - I like how you open, subtly but concretely rooting us in the setting. - For stronger writing, delete the "... though it... Read More »

The Twenty-Four Hour Story

(about 4 years ago)

My notes: - You do a great job of describing all of the actions, but I'm not getting any connection with the character, since I don't ... Read More »