Allyssa Carlise

My Writings

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    Contact Lenses

    Poetry, I just got my contact lenses and walked to school the next morning

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    The Stars

    Really short poem :)

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    Sometimes

    I wrote this after i tried to write poetry again....

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    Breeze Song

    poetry

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    Faces

    When a face is drawn on a piece of paper, does that give it life? What happens to it afterward? I drew a face the other day and it mad…

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    The Storm

    This poem I wrote in English....There was a storm going on outside and it inspired this poem. It's a personification poem really but i…

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about 1 month ago Elizabeth Rose said:

Hey ya'll :) Guess what? I just wrote a brand-spanking new story, and I want to share it with you! Cool, right? Wait, it's not? I think you'd better read it first... Called "The Boy With the Emerald Green Eyes" it's for a contest, and only needs ten more hearts to be a finalist! I'm not forcing you to heart my story, and please don't think I'm beggin'. Only heart my story if you think it deserves it. I don't want to have my story in the top ten purely based on lies! I would, however, love if you could give feedback of some sort. 'Course, you don't even have to do that. Just maybe take six minutes of your day to read my story? Give a reaction? It'd make my day :) I'd love a free read, but I'm willing to swap if you like. Just post on my wall what you want me to read in return. Or, if ya don't do swaps or just don't want to read my story, period, I'm deeply sorry for taking up your valuable time and wall space. Thanks :)

~Liza

*Just click the pic below to go to my story :)

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3 months ago Kelsey Taeckens said:

Hi! Could you please read (and please, please heart) Unexpected Gifts (the contest version)? The deadline for top ten is this week- I need all the help I can get. Let me know if you want anything read in return. Thanks!

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3 months ago Sebastian S said:

Hey wanna swap? If so please read and heart "The Flutter of a Final Heartbeat".

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4 months ago Nolee Balaqua ♡ ☯ said:

Hello. I am raising money for a charity that supports people in a crisis. Every year The British Red Cross helps over a million people in Britain and abroad. With help in emergencies, care in home, and first aid training. For every single heart that I get on my written advertisement Crisis, I will give £1 to this charity. I will read something of yours in return if you wish. Please help. This is for a remarkable cause that saves lives every day. Thank you.

-Nolee

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4 months ago Cali Summers said:

Hi! I just read an amazing story called A Daydream Away, by TheHalf-Light. It has just the right touch of humor, happiness, and irony. It'll only take 5 minutes of your time to read, and I know she would be so excited if you hearted or left a comment! :D

Thanks so much for taking the time to read this (:

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The Friend I Never Had

(almost 2 years ago)

I love music i just had to read your SP and I loved this. It is so true and i totally understand and can relate to this poem! It's beauti... Read More »

The Keepers

(almost 2 years ago)

SWAP for....i don't remember Yes it's me:D:D Finally OMIGOSH....my computer just deleted my WHOLE critique!!!! *&%!?# !! WHY ?????... Read More »