Allyssa Carlise

My Writings

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    Contact Lenses

    Poetry, I just got my contact lenses and walked to school the next morning

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    The Stars

    Really short poem :)

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    I wrote this after i tried to write poetry again....

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    Breeze Song


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    When a face is drawn on a piece of paper, does that give it life? What happens to it afterward? I drew a face the other day and it mad…

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    The Storm

    This poem I wrote in English....There was a storm going on outside and it inspired this poem. It's a personification poem really but i…

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3 months ago C. Van Asch (Chesster) said:

You have been invited to join Figment's 2nd Debate Club.

Warning: this group contains excessive amounts of logical thought, intelligent discussions, and absolutely no low blows. If you do argue with some random small point then you could be destroyed.


about 1 year ago A.R. KYRON said:

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over 2 years ago CeceO (On&off) said:

hi, want to swap?


over 3 years ago Meerab Farooqui said:

Heyyyy, wanna swap? :) would you mind reading and reviewing a thousand envelopes for me, and in return i will read and review anything you want. if you give me a long one, ill give you a long one in return and vice versa.


almost 4 years ago Kassidy said:

Hi my fellow Potterhead. LoL. Would you like to swap? Could you please heart/ give me feedback on my Harry Potter fan-fiction "Muggles and Mudbloods"? It is a dystopian take on the Harry Potter story based on the altenate scenario of if Voldemort had killed Harry Potter at the Battle of Hogwarts and ruled the world. It is told from the point of view of a Muggle girl named Octavia (original character) who must hide what she really is or be enslaved like the other Muggles. She hides herself to protect her Mudblood twin sister, Julia, and her adopted family. But will her cover be blown when she falls for a Death Eater, and will she take part in the underground Order of the Phoenix? Duh duh duh! Hehe. I am actually working on a play adaption for the story for my school's fall play for 2016. Any who, that's why I would really enjoy feed back because I always like honest opinions about my writing so that I can improve! Here's the link:! I will read anything you want me to in return! Thanks!

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The Friend I Never Had

(over 6 years ago)

I love music i just had to read your SP and I loved this. It is so true and i totally understand and can relate to this poem! It's beauti... Read More »

The Keepers

(over 6 years ago)

SWAP for....i don't remember Yes it's me:D:D Finally computer just deleted my WHOLE critique!!!! *&%!?# !! WHY ?????... Read More »