Allyssa Carlise

My Writings

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    Contact Lenses

    Poetry, I just got my contact lenses and walked to school the next morning

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    The Stars

    Really short poem :)

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    Sometimes

    I wrote this after i tried to write poetry again....

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    Breeze Song

    poetry

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    Faces

    When a face is drawn on a piece of paper, does that give it life? What happens to it afterward? I drew a face the other day and it mad…

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    The Storm

    This poem I wrote in English....There was a storm going on outside and it inspired this poem. It's a personification poem really but i…

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4 months ago Meerab Farooqui said:

Heyyyy, wanna swap? :) would you mind reading and reviewing a thousand envelopes for me, and in return i will read and review anything you want. if you give me a long one, ill give you a long one in return and vice versa.

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8 months ago Kassidy said:

Hi my fellow Potterhead. LoL. Would you like to swap? Could you please heart/ give me feedback on my Harry Potter fan-fiction "Muggles and Mudbloods"? It is a dystopian take on the Harry Potter story based on the altenate scenario of if Voldemort had killed Harry Potter at the Battle of Hogwarts and ruled the world. It is told from the point of view of a Muggle girl named Octavia (original character) who must hide what she really is or be enslaved like the other Muggles. She hides herself to protect her Mudblood twin sister, Julia, and her adopted family. But will her cover be blown when she falls for a Death Eater, and will she take part in the underground Order of the Phoenix? Duh duh duh! Hehe. I am actually working on a play adaption for the story for my school's fall play for 2016. Any who, that's why I would really enjoy feed back because I always like honest opinions about my writing so that I can improve! Here's the link: http://figment.com/books/244377-Muggles-and-Mudbloods! I will read anything you want me to in return! Thanks!

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over 1 year ago Kristiin Kerby said:

Go to: http://figment.com/groups/17430-Cover-Contests-for-the-Creative-Kind-

If your a cover maker you should join! It's fun for everyone!

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(Sorry if I posted this before)

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over 1 year ago Ella Everheart said:

Hey ya'll :) Guess what? I just wrote a brand-spanking new story, and I want to share it with you! Cool, right? Wait, it's not? I think you'd better read it first... Called "The Boy With the Emerald Green Eyes" it's for a contest, and only needs ten more hearts to be a finalist! I'm not forcing you to heart my story, and please don't think I'm beggin'. Only heart my story if you think it deserves it. I don't want to have my story in the top ten purely based on lies! I would, however, love if you could give feedback of some sort. 'Course, you don't even have to do that. Just maybe take six minutes of your day to read my story? Give a reaction? It'd make my day :) I'd love a free read, but I'm willing to swap if you like. Just post on my wall what you want me to read in return. Or, if ya don't do swaps or just don't want to read my story, period, I'm deeply sorry for taking up your valuable time and wall space. Thanks :)

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*Just click the pic below to go to my story :)

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over 1 year ago Kelsey Taeckens said:

Hi! Could you please read (and please, please heart) Unexpected Gifts (the contest version)? The deadline for top ten is this week- I need all the help I can get. Let me know if you want anything read in return. Thanks!

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The Friend I Never Had

(about 3 years ago)

I love music i just had to read your SP and I loved this. It is so true and i totally understand and can relate to this poem! It's beauti... Read More »

The Keepers

(about 3 years ago)

SWAP for....i don't remember Yes it's me:D:D Finally OMIGOSH....my computer just deleted my WHOLE critique!!!! *&%!?# !! WHY ?????... Read More »