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11 months ago aaron mitchell said:

thank you for reading!

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11 months ago ST said:

Hey Bethany,

Thanks for your comments on "We Jazz June." I like the world the story is written in too and am still discovering it! lol Both "Music" and "Dissonance" are centered around the same time, albeit at different points in the history of the town. Excuse any mistakes or plot holes, I'm still figuring just what this town and its people are all about! Comments are welcome and most likely needed!

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11 months ago Holden Meier said:

Thanks for the review, Bethany! I didn't notice I'd underlined things!! I need to fix that!! Aaaaah!! Thanks for catching it. ;-)

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11 months ago Jaz Higgs said:

Thank you dor reviewing The Due Date. I know that it needs a lot of work, which I'm doing at the moment. Thanks for reading!

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11 months ago Dreaming Wishes said:

BANANAS ARE THE BESTEST!

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Broken-Winged Birds

(11 months ago)

Really good :) I like how you phrase your sentances although I saw a few points (very few) where there was too much wordy stuff. Thou... Read More »

Unspoken

(11 months ago)

Go though and reread everything to make edits. I saw some grammar and spelling mistakes. I like the world you have painted so far. I ... Read More »